Thread:Indyfan4/@comment-22439-20160317050550/@comment-142718-20160318002315

Hello, your plot summary structure is fine as is. There's the Manual of Style as a general guide if that's any additional help.

If you want to link to other articles on the wiki you just need to use square brackets eg. Indiana Jones without the whole site URL. If you're using the VisualEditor click "Link Ctrl+K" and start typing in the box. It should give you a drop down list of articles with that name if they exist.

Do try to avoid linking outside the site in the body of the in-universe material (totally fine for behind the scenes sections), such as for the Macon. It should get a page here too so its Indy relevance can be expanded upon. The red just means it doesn't have one yet.

Having said that, the text could do with a little more clarification just so it reads better. For example, as it is now, Sarducci seems to just go from trying to kill Indy at every opportunity to telling him and Alecia where Alistair Dunstin is, it misses Sarducci letting them go because Alecia reminds him of his dead wife.

Welcome aboard. Always nice to someone expanding on stuff beyond the films.